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@@ -28,25 +28,24 @@ <h1 class="title title-1">Gradience is a hack!</h1>
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-        <h1 class="title title-1">Why Gradience is a hack?</h1>
+        <h1 class="title title-1">What makes Gradience a hack?</h1>
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-        <p class="title title-3">Gradience overrides Named Colors for recoloring.</p>
-        <p>Gradience overrides Libadwaita <a
-            href="https://gnome.pages.gitlab.gnome.org/libadwaita/doc/main/named-colors.html">Named Colors</a> with
-          custom values, this can cause issues like invisible text, wrong colors, and etc.</p>
+        <p class="title title-3">Gradience overrides libadwaita's Named Colors.</p>
+        <p>Gradience replaces libadwaita's <a
+            href="https://gnome.pages.gitlab.gnome.org/libadwaita/doc/main/named-colors.html">Named Colors</a> with its own
+          custom values. This can cause issues such as invisible text or broken palettes.</p>
 
-        <p class="title title-3">Gradience is not supported by Adwaita.</p>
-        <p>Gradience is dependent on some hacks to work, if Adwaita will make changes in them Gradience will stop
-          working.</p>
+        <p class="title title-3">Gradience is not supported by libadwaita.</p>
+        <p>Gradience isn't officially supported by the GNOME team. If significant changes are made to libadwaita upstream, this can cause Gradience to stop working correctly.</p>
 
-        <p class="title title-3">Gradience can break UI.</p>
-        <p>Gradience can break some apps UI that rely on custom CSS by default.</p>
+        <p class="title title-3">Gradience can break custom UI.</p>
+        <p>Gradience can break some apps which rely on setting their own colors and styles to properly display user interface elements.</p>
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@@ -60,10 +59,8 @@ <h1 class="title title-1">Why Gradience is a hack?</h1>
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         <h1 class="title title-1">Gradience is not against stopthemingmy.app</h1>
-        <p>Gradience Team is not against <b>stopthemingmy.app</b> and Adwaita Developers idea, Gradience is a tool for
-          tinkers that want to theme their desktops at their liking, and not a tool for distributions to change theme in
-          them by default, Gradience Team agrees with importance of unified look of Adwaita to make sure that all apps
-          work right and Developers have unified and stable tool for creating their apps.</p>
+        <p>The Gradience team does not oppose the message laid out by <b>stopthemingmy.app</b> and the developers of libadwaita. Gradience is a tool for
+          tinkerers that wish to theme their desktops to their liking; not a tool for distributions to ship hacky style changes to users by default. The Gradience team believes in the importance of a stable and unified look due to the benefits it brings to the design of apps.</p>
         <a href="https://stopthemingmy.app" class="button visit-button green-button">Visit stopthemingmy.app</a>
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