Updating welcome docs

docs/Design and Motivations.md

@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@ Now that I've said some nice things about Git...
 
 ### Git's UX is ~~terrible~~, uh... not always great.
 
- [I](https://xkcd.com/1597/) [hope](https://gracevcsdevelopment.blob.core.windows.net/static/RandomGitCommands.jpeg) [this](https://git-man-page-generator.lokaltog.net) [is](https://rakhim.org/honestly-undefined/13/) [not](https://gracevcsdevelopment.blob.core.windows.net/static/MemorizingSixGitCommands.jpg) [a](https://www.quora.com/Why-is-Git-so-hard-to-learn) [controversial](https://www.quora.com/If-I-think-Git-is-too-hard-to-learn-does-it-mean-that-I-dont-have-the-potential-to-be-a-developer) [statement](https://twitter.com/markrussinovich/status/1395143648191279105). And I know I'm not alone in thinking it.
+ [I](https://xkcd.com/1597/) [hope](https://gracevcsdevelopment.blob.core.windows.net/static/RandomGitCommands.jpeg) [this](https://git-man-page-generator.lokaltog.net) [is](https://rakhim.org/honestly-undefined/13/) [not](https://gracevcsdevelopment.blob.core.windows.net/static/MemorizingSixGitCommands.jpg) [a](https://www.quora.com/Why-is-Git-so-hard-to-learn) [controversial](https://www.quora.com/If-I-think-Git-is-too-hard-to-learn-does-it-mean-that-I-dont-have-the-potential-to-be-a-developer) [statement](https://twitter.com/markrussinovich/status/1395143648191279105). And [I](https://twitter.com/robertskmiles/status/1431560311086137353) **[know](https://twitter.com/markrussinovich/status/1578451245249052672)** [I'm](https://ohshitgit.com/) [not](https://twitter.com/dvd848/status/1508528441519484931) [alone](https://twitter.com/shanselman/status/1102296651081760768) [in](https://www.linuxjournal.com/content/terrible-ideas-git) [thinking](https://blog.acolyer.org/2016/10/24/whats-wrong-with-git-a-conceptual-design-analysis/) [it](https://matt-rickard.com/the-terrible-ux-of-git).
 
-Learning Git is far too hard. It's almost a hazing ritual that we put ourselves through as an industry. Git forces the user to understand far too much about its internals just to become a proficient user. Maybe 15%-20% of users really understand it. Many of its regular users are literally afraid of it. Including me.
+Learning Git is far too hard. It's basically a hazing ritual that we put ourselves through as an industry. Git forces the user to understand far too much about its internals just to become a proficient user. Maybe 15%-20% of users really understand it. Many of its regular users are literally afraid of it. Including me.
 
 ### Grace's UX is much, much nicer.