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<div class="mission">
<div class="container">
<p>
People are sharing more and more photos and videos every day. Mobile
networks remain fragile however. Platform APIs are also often a mess
and every project builds its own file uploader. There are a thousand
People are sharing more and more photos and videos every day, but
mobile
networks remain fragile. Platform APIs are often a mess and every
project builds its own file uploader. There are a thousand
one-week projects that barely work, when all we need is one real
project. One project done right.
</p>

<p>
We are the ones who are going to do this right. Our aim is to solve
the problem of unreliable file uploads once and for all. tus is a new
open{' '}
We are going to do this right. Our aim is to make file uploads
reliable once and for all. tus is a new, open{' '}
<a href="/protocols/resumable-upload.html">
protocol for resumable uploads
</a>{' '}
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</p>

<p>
It may seem to be an impossible dream. Perhaps that is because no-one
has managed to solve it yet. Still, we are confident and we are going
to give it our best shot.{' '}
It may seem to be an impossible dream. Perhaps that is because no one
has solved it yet. Still, we are confident and we are going to give it
our best shot.{' '}
<a target="" href="https://github.com/tus"> Join us on GitHub</a>{' '}
and help us make the world a better place. Say "No!" to lost cat videos!
Say "Yes!" to tus!
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<p>
We are still actively improving the protocol and all of its
implementations. We welcome your involvement and are happy to answer any
question!
questions!
</p>
<Social centered />
</div>
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</div>

<p>
Do you also (plan to) use tus?{' '}
Do you (plan to) use tus?{' '}
<a href="https://github.com/tus/tus.io/edit/main/src/data/logos.json">
Add your company
</a>
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